NHS
Parking Text Analysis
The sign’s purpose is to inform the receiver of
the text of the legal obligations involved in parking in the hospital car
park. The receiver would likely be a
visitor to the hospital, so they may be stressed or in a rush. A large bold font is used for the title:
“Terms and Conditions”, which lies on a coloured background; this is designed
to attract the reader’s attention, and emphasise the importance of the
text. Below this there is a caption
starting with the words “IMPORTANT NOTICE” in capitals, which is also intended
to make the reader feel obliged to read the text. However, it should be noted that this is not
in the same large bold font that the title is written in, which could suggest
that the author of the text did not want the audience to read it, as this would
mean they would have to pay a monetary fine to the author’s organisation.
The lexical content is formal and often contains
words related to the law concerning parking.
To accommodate for the audience, who may be stressed and hurried, the
text is concise and utterances are shorter than they might be in a different
type of text or context. The author is
also legally obligated to explain the legal obligations of the receiver, so
they must maintain clarity and ensure that all of the necessary information is
present. At the foot of text there is a
paragraph in a smaller font which details the conditions under which the
company, Total Parking Solutions (TPS), can be held responsible for any damage
to property. This could be written in a
smaller print because it is not necessary for the receiver to read this section
unless they are under the circumstances it describes. It could also be that TPS wishes to avoid
legal action, which is less likely to happen if the receiver is ignorant of the
law.
Several diagrams have been used to illustrate
the points raised in each paragraph, which may be to improve the clarity of the
text, which is beneficial to both parties in this context. As mentioned previously, the receiver may be
in a pressured situation, so using diagrams may serve to make the information
easier to digest for them. It should
also be noted that several logos have been used, possibly for the purpose of
making the text look more official and legitimate. For example the NHS logo has been used, which
may increase the trust the receiver places in the text, considering that the
NHS is perceived to be a large, reputable organisation.
This is the best piece you've written yet. You rely heavily on comments about graphology so, to improve, make sure you get more lexical and grammatical terminology in by choosing quotes that allow you to do that. Use writer and leave author for novels (usually). Good linking to context. Well done.
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